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Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Mystery

      Featherpaw peeped open an eye as silver shafts of light entered the Apprentice den. She felt Talonpaw sprawled out beside her and growled softly to herself. Did he always have to take up half the den? It was a small bush already, the ginger tom didn't need to help that. The gray tabby she-cat got up out of the den, stretching out. The moon was full and washed over Featherpaw with a silver glow. She padded out into the woods. Snakefang was busy out with a Warrior training session so she had time to herself.
      The woods were quiet despite the fact that cats stirred within. Everyone had gotten good at moving through the undergrowth, especially Featherpaw. She twisted under ferns and through bracken silently. She was immediately alerted when there was a loud crackling. Featherpaw froze, the fur along her shoulders beginning to bristle. What do I do? Is it a badger? Fox? Rouge? If she was back with her housefolk the gray Apprentice would have retreated to their den and curled up with the female two-leg to be petted, but she was training to be a Warrior now.
       Featherpaw headed toward the noise, using every stealth tactic she had been taught. As she broke through a clump of ferns, she saw it. A peppery white she-cat with faded stripes was struggling to get through the thick undergrowth. A trespasser! Featherpaw unsheathed her claws. She scented the air carefully. No one else was around. This was her opportunity to prove she was just as good as any other cat in Twilightclan. She would show this intruder that she was on the wrong side of the border. Snakefang would be so proud.

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58 comments:

  1. Featherpaw bared her teeth, and leaped at the cat.

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  2. The she cat swung her off with sharp claws and teeth but struggled to move she move to a small clearing where she could move around better.

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  3. Featherpaw hissed in annoyance and gave chase. When she caught up with the cat, she leaped again and sunk her claws into the mysterious she-cat's shoulders, refusing to let go.

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  4. Mystery raised up on her hind legs and fell back crushing Featherpaw under her. She spun around ripping her claws across her belly deeply.

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  5. (Woah, don't kill my kitty o3o)

    Featherpaw gave a shriek of pain, but she retaliated by leaping up, and grabbing Mystery's throat in her teeth loosely, threw her at a nearby tree trunk. "Who are you?!" she hissed. "What are you doing on TwilightClan territory?!"

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  6. (no worry i wont)

    she didnt say anything she just spat up blood into her eyes causing her to loose some sight.

    Boulderclaw was walking by and heard what was going on and charged through to the two and clashed bodies with the she-cat. that caused her to loose her breath"who are you and why are you here!" he said grabbing her scruff shaking her around a little.

    "my name is Mystery and i am here to join your clan i wasnt trespassing.."she spoke when he was done shaking her.

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  7. Featherpaw rubbed the blood out her eyes, and hissed at her. "Then, why'd you try to murder me?! I was protecting my Clan!! You could of told me that you weren't trespassing! You almost ripped by belly out!"

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  8. "sorry but you didnt seem to be in the mood to talk.."she was still on guard but her eyes were soft like nothing happened.

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  9. Featherpaw glared at her. "I would of... I'm just trying to protect my home..."

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  10. Snakefang was out looking for Featherpaw. He had finished Warrior training with Tawnynight and Thistlefur. "Featherpaw!" He rushed forward when he caught the scent of blood and broke through the furs, seeing the group. "What happened here!?" His ears were flat and his teeth flashed as he spoke.

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  11. "sure..okay i believe you so who do i have to speak to so i can jion?"she asked looking at both of them.

    Bloulder looked at Featherpaw worried, but pushed it aside. "that would be our leader..."

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  12. Featherpaw was still glaring at Mystery when she replied to her mentor. "I was talking a walk, saw this she-cat, I tried to chase her out, but then she decides to kill me. If it weren't for Boulderclaw, she would of most likely finished me off..."

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  13. Snakefang looked at Mystery with a fierce look in his amber gaze. The dark tabby tom stood between his Apprentice and the intruder. "What's your business here?" His voice was cold. He looked at Boulderclaw thankfully.

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  15. (ok sorry i didnt see that lol i need my glasses)

    "i am here to join your clan but then again i think i wont..due to the way im being treated."her eyes were no longer soft but a bitter hate.

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  16. Snakefang flicked an ear. He didn't really want her to join; no after she hurt Featherpaw. Still, Ghoststar would and she seemed to have decent fighting skills. "No...I'll take you back to camp. Keep your claws in though." He said sternly. Snakefang walked close to Featherpaw, concerned about her wounds. "Are you okay?" He asked quietly.

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  17. Featherpaw nodded. "Other than some scars on my belly, I'm fine... Thanks." She looked up at him. "How was night training?"

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  18. the she-cat walked behind Snakefang keeping her claws in.

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  19. He hung his head a bit. "Tiring..." He flicked an ear. "But this certainly woke me up. Silver switched to Medicine cat Apprentice. She doesn't have a mentor and doesn't know some things but I bet she'll be able to heal you." He silently prayed.

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  20. Featherpaw nodded. "Hope so."

    (Mystery and Featherpaw hate each other o3o ... I'm guessing)

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  21. Boulderclaw nudged Snakefang,"she will be okay."he said looking back at the she-cat that was walking behind them.

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  22. They got back to camp and Snakefang fetched Silver while Ghoststar talked to Mystery.

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  23. "i can be a great cat to have i may have been a kitty-pet but i do have my wild side.."she smiled confidentiality.

    "oh..oh my gosh what happened to you!"she was shocked but didnt take her eyes off of the wound while she grabbed herbs.

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  24. Featherpaw glared at Mystery and spat out, "That fox-dung excuse of a she-cat tried to kill me!"

    (Belly wounds are fatal, right?)

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  25. Ghoststar narrowed her eyes. "Confident are we?" She sat, wrapping her tail around her paws. "Well, if you think you can take it I'll let you join. As.." She cocked her head. "What's your name?"

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  26. Snakefang hovered near Featherpaw, concern in his pale amber eyes. "How bad is it, Silver? Will she be okay? Will she heal?"

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  27. "calm down dont get your whiskers in a bunch shes fine she wont be able to train for awhile, here take these poppy seeds that should help with the pain."she said putting her paw in front of her mouth.

    "my name is Mystery around me you should expect the unexpected..."she said looking at Snakefang and Featherpaw.

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  28. Featherpaw hissed at Mystery before lapping up the poppy seeds and wrapping herself in a tight ball, her long, fluffy tail covering most of her face.

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  29. Ghoststar spoke with a growl. "Lovely. With me, you should expect strict rule. Follow orders." She thought for a moment. "Your apprentice name will be Snowpaw. Your mentor, will be me."

    Snakefang let out a sigh of relief. "Okay, thank you Silver."

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  30. "every well. ill be happy to start"she walked out heading to the den.

    "anytime Snakefang...still think im no good cause im a kitty-pet?"she asked looking at him softly.

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  31. Snakefang flattened his ears. He looked down. Without any remark to match hers he simply turned, walking off with a lashing tail.

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  32. "ill take that was a yes..."she flattened her eyes and went to her den.

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  33. Ghoststar didn't like the she-cat's cocky attitude.

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  34. Boulderclaw went to talk to Ghoststar, i dont like her, in anyway..."hes charming voice was coming on.

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  35. Ghoststar twitched an ear. At least he's a good judge of character. "Neither do I...But she does seem to have decent fighting skills. Is Featherpaw okay?" She looked at him.

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  36. "yes she just needs rest...hey Ghoststar i uh was just thinking...do you maybe want to go hunting together?"he said looking down moving the dirt with a paw.

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  37. Ghoststar watched his movements carefully. It can't hurt? "Sure." She said with an even tone.

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  38. "great!"he jumped up happily."come on i know a good place to hunt.."he said walking toward the entrance.

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  39. Ghoststar followed him, rolling her eyes a little.

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  40. Boulder lead her around in circles purposefully, "So you have a mr.ghoststar and if not what qualities would you be looking for?"he stood strong and impressive.

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  41. Ghoststar felt herself get a little embarrassed. "No..." She thought for a moment, figuring it would hurt to tell him. "Someone who was...loyal, and strong. Brave, but modest." She emphasized the word modest in her mew.

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  42. "ok well im strong loyal and brave..."he said looking into her eyes smoothly.

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  43. "But not modest." She spat, trotting ahead. "Hey...aren't we going in circles?"

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  44. "i can learn!he said running after her,"So i can talk to you..."he said looking into her eyes smoothly.

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  45. Cloudstar flattened her ears. "Very clever." She scented the air searching for prey. "But don't waste your time. I know your type. A flirt."

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  46. "like i said i could change all for you..."he said stepping in front of her.

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  47. "Sure, tiger." She said sarcastically. "Now, I'm tracking a mouse if you don't mind." She smiled a bit as she walked away, but made sure he didn't see.

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  48. "okay okay dont believe me..."he said smelling the air.

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  49. Ghoststar silently tracked the mouse and caught it with a swift blow. She came out. "Looks like I'm winning so far." She purred.

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  50. "ha barely.."he had a mouse and vole in his mouth when she saw him.

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  51. Ghoststar flicked an ear. "Okay, so it's competitive eh?" She headed back into the woods and caught a weasel, but it almost slipped out of her paws. She came back. "Aha!"

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  52. He held up a paw and went out and came back with a small bird."ahaha they are rare here so i win."he said sticking up his nose.

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  53. Ghoststar rolled her eyes. "Barely won."

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  54. "cant take the heat that, i won and you my friend, lost!?"he bounced around her playfully.

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